Monday, November 30, 2015
Google drive
Using google drive in our english has become an essential tools. It tells us what is going on in class and also gives us a rubric to go by when writing an essay. Google drive is also a good tool because we can now share our documents with other classmates. I would highly recommend google drive to everyone teacher on this campus.
Saturday, November 21, 2015
quotes using two peers quotes
I totally agree with shawnise's statement. She says that the peer review process has advantages and disadvantages. She believes it is effective because it allows students to help others without having it in their face. Peer review is good for college students because you get feedback from multiple people. Shawnise couldn't have said it any better.
Sierra says when she was writing her doc3, she had to write from a reader point of view. She also says that she has to constantly re-read the paper to make sure it stayed on topic. I am just like Sierra. I have to constantly read something so it make sense and that i'm not just talking about unnecessary things.
Sierra says when she was writing her doc3, she had to write from a reader point of view. She also says that she has to constantly re-read the paper to make sure it stayed on topic. I am just like Sierra. I have to constantly read something so it make sense and that i'm not just talking about unnecessary things.
Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Peer review
Giving and receiving advice is very efficient when writing. When writing a paper, you would want to receive peer review from your peers so you can see how they feel about the topic and to see what mistakes they feel need to be corrected. You should also give peer review to let your peers know what mistakes they have made so they can correct them before submitting the final document.
Monday, November 16, 2015
Doc 3
When writing my doc 3, the previous information I learned really helped me. My Wikipedia topic had so much information on it that I was also able to use it in my doc3. I knew some things on my topic so I added that in as well. I am interested in my doc3 and also anxious to get my degree to start helping others.
Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Open topic
Document 3 is a bit interesting to me. Overall, while doing some research over my career, I never imagined the lifestyle was like this. The pay is very good, but the most important part is that I get to help people in this world for a better tomorrow.
Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Favorite post
My favorite post overall was finding humor in strange situations. This is my favorite one because it relates to me very well. "I am a goofy person anyways because I am always laughing". Whenever something goes wrong in a situation, I always think of a song. Sometimes it relates to the situation, sometimes it doesn't . Whenever I start to sing, it just makes the vibe feel better and it also gives everyone a time to breathe and to get back calm.
Monday, November 9, 2015
why do you write?
Writing is sometimes difficult, but the more you write, the more thoughts come into your head faster. We write to learn.
watch what you put on social media
We must watch what we put on social media because we want to get good jobs when we get out of school. Employers look you up when you apply for jobs to get more info about you.
How to revise a document
When you revise a previous document, its always good to check for grammatical errors. It is even better if you get peers to read over the material you have produced. Getting feedback from others can help improve your performance and it also lets you know their point of view and opinions they have had over it. You also want to make sure that you have explained at least some of the points. You don't have to go down to very little detail but just enough to explain the significance of it.
Wednesday, November 4, 2015
quoting others
Kenyada talks about the cafe. The cafe food is sometimes good, others it's not. I think that they should have a little bit more variety and actually change it up from time to time. Kenyada says that "we are in college and we don't have access to cook food so they should feed us something actually worth eating". Kenyada is right, if they were to put stoves in our dorm then maybe it will be a little better.
Sam talks about childhood games. All of us as kids use to love playing childhood games. My favorite one was hiding go seek. Sam says his favorite games were " Pokémon, Super Mario, Golden Eye 007, when he sees his nephew, he thinks to himself that they have no idea what they missed out on". With new technology advancing each year, more and more things are going out of style and so much more is just coming in.
Sam talks about childhood games. All of us as kids use to love playing childhood games. My favorite one was hiding go seek. Sam says his favorite games were " Pokémon, Super Mario, Golden Eye 007, when he sees his nephew, he thinks to himself that they have no idea what they missed out on". With new technology advancing each year, more and more things are going out of style and so much more is just coming in.
Tuesday, November 3, 2015
child/adult conflicts
Children and adults conflicts are very often in the world we live in. This usually falls into the category of parents and their children. Most of the time is they have conflicts because the parent won't listen to their children or the parents are a little harsh and the kids dont think it may be fair. But we all must learn to get a long to reach a compromise. Situations also differ depending on who is invovled.
Monday, November 2, 2015
childhood games
My favorite childhood game was hiding go seek. I always played it with my friends and we would always have so much fun. Childhood games are fun and they give you a chance to break loose and relax. Childhood games can always be remembered. As people grow older, they don't tend to play their childhood games as much, but I bet you they try to play it with their friends, family, or even children. Childhood games can always be passed down from generation to generation.
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